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"Goodnight"

"Goodnight"
You said
After all was said and done
And you retired to your land
of peace, and of tranquility
I was left behind
Awake
Away from you
Thinking of you
Aching for you
And dreaming of those nights
That we spend in each other's arms.
Together.

Sit, I did
In a torment of endless unrest
Ceaseless awake
Unable to find the peace
I so long yearn for
No remedy to help me pass on
No kiss to relieve me
From my lasting walk
Through the night
And into day

I watched the sun coming up
Over the rooftops
As the moon must be coming up
Over yours
Half a world away
Half a lifetime ago
I held you
In unison as we watched
A setting sun together
Then drifted into slumber
As one
No fitful dreams of terror
No waking in tears

Just the solace of sleeping
In the embrace
Of purity.

So goodnight, my love
And sleep well.
May rest find you this night
As the full moon watches over you
As I wait,
Half a world away
Half a lifetime away
For the sun to set
And for the night to come.
©2007-2009 ~peterlack
:iconpeterlack:

Author's Comments

This was written for those with a love half a world away... half a lifetime away. For those who yearn to sleep in the safety of a lover... and for those who dream to do so again.

And for those who sleep restlessly... may rest find you this night, and may the moon watch over you as you dream of the embrace you so yearn for...

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:icondavetf:
While I may be single and stuff, I have experienced the feelings you've written here too often. I'm glad someone made some kind of poem outta that.

Fav'd.
:iconkawaii-mew-chan:
I agree with Dave.. This is so awesome Primal-chan. <3 but it was about to make me cry, then it ended so I didn't. ;~;

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:iconlordluke:
You posted this in November 2007 and i finally get around to reading it.

Wow, i should have read your stuff ages ago. Truly amazing. I hope these days you feel much better.

*faved*

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:iconpeterlack:
Thanks, but.... not especially.

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